In Writers’ Workshop last week, we created sentences with added clauses to describe a loud noise. Here are some of the sentences. Leave a comment to tell us which sentences you like, and why.
- It was so loud glass shattered
- It was so loud my fish tank smashed to pieces.
- It was so loud everyone in cross country stopped and ran to their mums, shivering.
- It was so loud that my crazy crabs curled up in their shells.
- It was so loud that all the people on the freeway went off track.
- It was so loud we all went under the desks.
- It was so loud we felt like we were shaking.
- It was so loud all the kids trembled to the ground.
- It was so loud that everyone ran out of the classroom.
- It was so loud everyone’s body shook.
- It was so loud that everybody hid under the table.
- It was so loud that the roof shook and everybody was shaking in fright. Their ears felt as if they weren’t hearing at all.
- It was so loud that the glass broke into a million pieces and tumbled to the ground.
- It was so loud that everybody stopped doing Daily Five and went outside to look at what it was.
- It was so loud that it felt like my ears were broken.
- It was so loud everyone hid under the tables.
- It was so loud the school had a blackout.
- It was so loud my eardrums exploded!
- It was so loud that everyone ran outside to see what it was.
- It was so loud that it felt like my ears fell off.
- It was so loud my cat woke from his deep sleep.
- It was so loud all of the babies screamed.
- It was so loud the whole of Adventure World shook.
- It was so loud pictures fell off the wall.
- It was so loud the lights shattered.
- It was so loud that a faraway iceberg sunk.
- It was so loud that all the leaves fell off the tree.