28 thoughts on “PERSUADE ME!

  • March 25, 2019 at 10:08 am
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    Most of boy’s emoji’s are bad but they sometimes have a strong meaning.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:08 am
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    There are many emoji’s in the world but only some are used daily by the people of the world.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:09 am
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    Watching Netflix is fun, but watching to much will be bad for your eyes.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:10 am
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    Netflix has many interesting TV shows and movies but some aren’t suitable for children to watch.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:11 am
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    All Saints’ 011 scored more points than the opposition so they made it into the finals.

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    • March 25, 2019 at 10:12 am
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      Matthew, this is more of a sentence for a report or narrative. Can you think of a persuasive sentence? Nice use of SO!

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:11 am
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    Netflix is awesome but it takes a really long time to download new movies.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:24 am
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    At camp, someone put tomato sauce in their water and/or drank it straight out of the bottle.

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    • March 26, 2019 at 9:47 am
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      Try again Sahlia. It must persuade the reader to do something or think something.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:26 am
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    Sushi is a very tasty Japanese food but some dislike it for its seaweed.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:27 am
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    Netflix can give the best movies but some can be very inappropriate for people.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:28 am
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    Netflix is very good but if you watch too much it is bad for your brain.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:28 am
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    A pen licence is really exciting to get yet what if there are some people who right neatly in pen, and UN-neat in a led pencil.

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    • March 26, 2019 at 9:46 am
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      I love this sentence! Great use of the YET conjunction. TIP: watch out for the homophone write/right.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:29 am
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    There many emojis so most of them are copyright.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:42 am
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    Netflix is the best movie streaming platform because it has such good quality and has the
    all the latest movies and some tv shows.

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    • March 26, 2019 at 9:45 am
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      Have another go, Rohan. Use one of the BOYS conjunctions: BUT OR YET SO.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:43 am
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    Basketball is a very fun sport BUT people can get injured.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:43 am
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    Netflix is awesome yet when you download new movies it takes a long time.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:44 am
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    Netflix is very awesome. + It is very expensive.
    = Netflix is very awesome yet it is very expensive.

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:44 am
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    Nobody should eat tomato sauce or they will have too much sugar.
    James Ji

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:45 am
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    Netflix is very good but it cost a lot of money to buy and watch movies on it.

    James J

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:46 am
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    Netflix is amazing because you can download movies for free yet if you went on to Bigpond movies you would have to pay

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  • March 25, 2019 at 10:47 am
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    some boys watch netflix but mostly they watch youtube.

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    • March 26, 2019 at 9:41 am
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      Nice sentence! TIP: watch out for capital letters – beginning of the sentence and for proper nouns (Netflix, YouTube).

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